Book Review: The Spirit Heir by Kaitlyn Davis

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Book Review: The Spirit Heir by Kaitlyn Davis

I received this book for free from Author in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.

Book Review: The Spirit Heir by Kaitlyn DavisThe Spirit Heir by Kaitlyn Davis
Series: A Dance of Dragons #2
on October 30th 2014
Genres: Fantasy, Paranormal, Romance, Young Adult
Pages: 248
Source: Author
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From bestselling author Kaitlyn Davis comes the second book in the thrilling A Dance of Dragons series—perfect for fans of Throne of Glass, Graceling, and Game of Thrones!

Drenched in darkness and surrounded by the echo of screams, Jinji waits deep in the dungeons of Rayfort, haunted by the memory of the knife stabbing Rhen, plagued by a foreign voice whispering through her mind. A few floors above, Rhen rests trapped in a coma, about to wake to a changed world—a world where his best friend is a woman, his nephew is the king, and an enemy army surrounds him on all sides.

But human wars are insignificant compared to the darkness gathering unseen. Memories of lives she never lived flash through Jinji's thoughts, hinting at a past that cannot be repeated. A mysterious phantom visits Rhen, carrying cryptic messages of the future. And somewhere out there, the shadow continues to lurk in silence.

Startled by their altered relationship and tempted by new feelings, Rhen and Jinji must find a way to work together. The fate of humanity rests on their shoulders and the real battle has only just begun…

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Information for The Shadow Soul (A Dance of Dragons #1)

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GAME OF THRONES meets GRACELING in a new young adult fantasy by bestselling author Kaitlyn Davis. Told in alternating male and female perspectives, THE SHADOW SOUL has been hailed as "an amazing start to a new series that is going to have people of all ages wanting so much more." (Happy Tails & Tales Reviews)

When Jinji's home is destroyed, she is left with nowhere to run and no one to run to—until she meets Rhen, a prince chasing rumors that foreign enemies have landed on his shores. Masquerading as a boy, Jinji joins Rhen with vengeance in her heart. But traveling together doesn't mean trusting one another, and both are keeping a deep secret—magic. Jinji can weave the elements to create master illusions and Rhen can pull burning flames into his flesh.

But while they struggle to hide the truth, a shadow lurks in the night. An ancient evil has reawakened, and unbeknownst to them, these two unlikely companions hold the key to its defeat. Because their meeting was not coincidence—it was fate. And their story has played out before, in a long forgotten time, an age of myth that is about to be reborn…
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My Thoughts

Let’s start with the awesome!

I hated the way book one ended! Fortunately this picks up right there! There is no more cliff hanger YAY!!! The relationship between Jinji and Rhen was my favorite part. There is so much turmoil going on in their worlds and they have to go through all of that AND try to get to know each other and trust! That word never seemed like a four letter word before!

The characters are even more developed than the first. I think in this we get to the meat of each of them and it makes for some great drama. Poor Rhen has some awful choices to make but I think he makes them wisely. There are a lot of twists in this for them too! Just the fact that I can see their growth, not only towards each other but each of them have gotten stronger and they both have more trust in themselves.

Then the not so much…

Ok, I can see why the book is set up the way it is. Namely the first few chapters. But because we see Jinji first and then Rhen the plot has to go backwards to catch up. That first chapter was great but then we had to find out about Rhen and what was going on in his world. Maybe Rhen’s chapter would have been slower but it would have made more sense to me I think. That said it wasn’t much of a hiccup for me, just a small oddity that threw me for a bit.

I also would have preferred a little bit more background. See, now I’m asking for the story to slow! You can never make readers satisfied, I swear! My problem was that I read the first, The Shadow Soul, way back in Feb so it took me a long while to get back into the groove of Jinji and Rhen’s relationship.

Again with the ending!!! Everything at the ending was so crazy and written so well but dang it all! I did not want this to end. Kaitlyn has a great way of doing that to her readers!

In short: Cannot be read without at least book one. There are also novellas that I am sure would add to the story!

Rating Report
4 / 5
Character Development
5 / 5
Writing Style
5 / 5
Personal enjoyment
5 / 5
4.5 / 5
Overall: 4.7 / 5


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The Shadow Soul – Chapter 7

When Jinji neared the cage, Rhen grasped her arms, lifting her free of the rope and pulling her safely into the wooden basket. She panted for a moment, regained her depleted strength, and took in the view. Blue. For miles and miles in every direction, a stark and sparkling blue. She tried to stand, but the rocking of the ship was magnified with their height, and it seemed to tip almost sideways with every other breath. Her legs wobbled, and then she dropped back to the floor. “Stay seated,” Rhen said, pushing down just slightly on her shoulder when she tried to lift herself up for the second time. He sat too, sighing as he dangled his feet over the edge and leaned back into the railing. His large frame took up over half of the small space. Their arms touched from shoulder to elbow, causing a heat to rise under her skin. Jinji grabbed her legs, pulling them into her chest and shifting her weight, careful not to touch his body anymore. It was too intimate, she realized, after spending so many hours locked in the same room as him. There had to be a distance between them, otherwise she might slip up, might forget that she was supposed to be a boy, that she was supposed to be lying. He might notice that though her face was that of a male, her body was not. The baggy clothes hid it well, but in these close quarters, she had to be careful. No matter how many times he taunted her, Rhen had come to be a friend, and she would not mess that up, not yet. “This is one of my favorite spots on the ship,” he said, eyes still closed in relaxation, “though many wouldn’t say the same. It’s considered a punishment to be put up here, because of all the movement, but I’ve always found it very peaceful, very liberating.” Feeling her stomach unsettle slowly, Jinji might have agreed with the others, but there was something oddly comforting in her mood and oddly settled too. “This was where I came to escape the castle and my father and mostly my responsibilities. Even if I was only on the dock, still stuck in Rayfort, I seemed miles away on top of this ship.” He opened his eyes slowly. The wind rustled his red hair, forcing it to spill over his forehead. Jinji wondered if her own short hair was doing the same, without her braid to keep it still and steady. Just the other night she had borrowed Rhen’s knife to cut it short again, not ready to stop her mourning period—not even close. “Do you have a place like that?” Jinji closed her eyes tight, fighting back the water gathering there. The clearing. The meadow. It used to be her spot, but all she saw now was Leoa, tying her braid, pulling over her joining dress. Both of them giggling, completely ignorant to the cries of their people, to the children and the women, to the warriors, to her parents. Even to Maniuk, singled out by the shadow for his strength and his skill—used and discarded. All she heard now was the blood-curdling scream that cracked her spirit in half, the pounding of her footsteps, the soft thud of a body as it fell to the ground. “No,” was all she said. No, she didn’t have a safe place like that, not anymore. “It will get better,” Rhen said. Jinji wouldn’t look at him, but instead focused on the far away horizon. “I know it doesn’t seem like it, but it will.” He took a deep breath, cracked his knuckles. Jinji almost heard the words waiting on his lips, could feel them press against his tongue wanting to come out. The air was static, electric from his pounding heart, his pulsing nerves. And then it all stopped. Silence. “I had a younger brother once,” Rhen confessed, his words heavy with an emotion that was mirrored by Jinji’s wounded soul. “He was barely a year old when he was murdered by the man my father trusted most in the world. And I could have stopped it, if I had only understood what—” His voice shook, wavered on an edge. “I found papers that held evidence the murder was going to take place, but I was too young to understand what they meant, too naïve to know what I had found. And for that, my brother paid the price.” He turned, met her stare with eyes a deep dark green, like the forest at twilight. “I know what it means to lose someone, but I also know that though the pain will never fully fade, eventually you will be able to endure it.” Jinji didn’t know what to say, so she said nothing at all. Silence was the better option. Silence let the words sink in, let their truth ring, let her realize that Rhen had allowed her a peek at a place within himself that he didn’t show to everyone—that he did not even show to most people. Jinji opened her mouth, aching to tell her own story, but her throat closed up, stealing the sound from her voice. She trusted him, after all he had done for her, Jinji trusted Rhen. But trusting someone was one thing, and opening herself up to him, making herself vulnerable to be hurt again, that was something else entirely. Rhen might have been willing, but it was only because he didn’t know that in the end, he would just be wounded—by her lie if he ever found out the truth or by her leaving without a word of goodbye. And Jinji couldn’t handle any more pain. “Thank you,” she said quietly, instantly regretting it. Rhen blinked once, but once was all it took for his gaze to unglaze and his features to retreat, to harden. One blink was all it took for him to shut himself off again.


The Author

About Kaitlyn Davis

Kaitlyn Davis is the bestselling author of the Midnight Fire series, a young adult paranormal romance, and the A Dance of Dragons series, a young adult epic fantasy.

Kaitlyn graduated Phi Beta Kappa from Johns Hopkins University with a B.A. in Writing Seminars. She's been writing ever since she picked up her first crayon and is overjoyed to finally share her work with the world. She currently lives in New York City and dreams of having a puppy of her own.

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4 Responses to “Book Review: The Spirit Heir by Kaitlyn Davis”

    • Christina

      It IS a pretty cover! Beware! Kaitlyn loves to torture her readers with cliff hangers! 😉

  1. Kaitlyn Davis

    Thank you so much for joining my review tour Christina!! I so appreciate you taking the time to read my book and write such a fantastic review, and I’m so glad you enjoyed it! Hopefully your readers will enjoy learning a bit more about my series! I’ll keep in touch when The Phoenix Born is ready, so you’re not left to dry with my ending 🙂 Thank you!

    • Christina

      Awesome! Thank you! I really do hate your endings but I love them! Such a conundrum.